My Bedroom-Draft one
My bedroom is like a small world. Everything is necessary and has been companied with me for a long time. When you walk into my room, you will see a window face the door in the right corner. My bed is on the left side of the window. It is really soft and comfortable. In front of the window is the bookshelf on the wall to the right. The computer is between the desk and the door. Opposite to the bed are the computer and the desk. There is a small table between the bed and the desk. All in all, my bedroom is like a treasure box to me.

10 Comments:
in the right corner=>還是用 on 呢!
Opposite to the bed are the computer and the desk=> are 要用 is吧!
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梁宜靜, at 4:53 AM
"Everything is necessary and has been companied with me for a long time." should correct to "...and has companied with..."
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Debie, at 4:55 AM
It seems to be have no problem.
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Estella, at 7:42 PM
sounds like you have much precious things in your room.
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Penny, at 7:55 PM
You forget to put draf one.
Mmm you must like your room very much.
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娜娜, at 8:00 PM
in the right 我會用
at the right
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Sally Sun, at 4:05 AM
no problem!
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林小雞, at 5:45 PM
想說的都被說完了
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Unknown, at 7:32 PM
Ok的!!
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薪雯, at 5:13 AM
不好意思in the right corner
應改為on the right corner
我改錯了
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Sally Sun, at 5:14 AM
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