Things I Like To Do On The Weekend
I like to do a lot of things on the weekend. First, I like doing shopping. Sometimes, some of my best friends will arrange a schedule to go out. Second, reading books, watching TV, or playing computer games is also a good idea. Finally, I think we should get healthier, so we can do some exercise like playing ball, riding a bicycle, and climbing mountains. I think things I do on the weekend is meaningful.

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Sometimes, some of my best friends will arrange a schedule ...
那個will 可以不用寫
reading books, watching TV, or playing computer games is also a good idea.......
這句包含很多事情所以be動詞要複數吧
good idea也複數吧
I think things I do on the weekend is .....
things be動詞用are 吧
do some exercise 是寫練習題的意思
用take和exercise即可
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Sally Sun, at 7:55 PM
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邱秀珍, at 7:57 PM
going shopping不是比較順嗎
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邱秀珍, at 7:58 PM
I think maybe you can increase your ideas after paragraph 2.
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Debie, at 7:58 PM
reading books, watching TV, or playing computer games *is also a good idea→are
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薪雯, at 8:02 PM
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