Autobiography(1) -Draft One
My name is Wei-hsin Chiu. You can also call me Sherry. There are four members in my family. My father who works in a factory is a mechanic. My mother, a career woman, is very capable. I have a younger brother who studies in the elementary school is just nine years old. Both of my parents work really hard, because they want us to live a comfortable life, and have an excellent environment.
I like to play volleyball and badminton. I never attend any ball teams. But I have joined an inter-class volleyball game in my class. My class won the championship in the two competitions. I deeply believe that is because we have an experienced coach, constant practice, and strong team spirit. I also have a special talent. Because of my voice, I was chose to be an emcee in our school. I think it will be a very wonderful experience in my school life.
I like to play volleyball and badminton. I never attend any ball teams. But I have joined an inter-class volleyball game in my class. My class won the championship in the two competitions. I deeply believe that is because we have an experienced coach, constant practice, and strong team spirit. I also have a special talent. Because of my voice, I was chose to be an emcee in our school. I think it will be a very wonderful experience in my school life.

6 Comments:
Sherry!You are right, I believe be an emcee is an unforgetable memory for you.
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Debie, at 6:10 AM
because前不必加逗號
But I have joined an inter-class volleyball game in my class
But I have ever joined 加ever 會較好
good!I don't think you write down all your talents.
You know many things we do not know......
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Sally Sun, at 10:07 PM
to live a comfortable life
"+ in"
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Penny, at 1:42 AM
I was "chosen" to be
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Estella, at 5:29 AM
Bigone, what do you mean? =ˇ=?
You say…I know many things you don’t know…
Hey!Hey!Hey!Maybe...
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邱暐心, at 7:58 AM
Your voice is really "special"
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Vivian, at 8:46 AM
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