Autobiography(2)-Draft One
When I was studied in Hou-Chia Junior High School, I have been a vice class leader for two years. I find I am more responsible after being a cadre in the class. Gradually, our teachers have more confidence to me and commend me for achievement. I think it is a good experience in my life of junior high school. After the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools, I applied to the National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School, and chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. Fortunately, I was accepted. In the first year, I was only in the middle of my class. When I was a second grader, I was chose to be an emcee and join a lot of activities. Although this is not a great event, it did build my self-confidence.
I have made up my mind to study Applied Foreign Language after my graduation from vocational high school. I hope that I can pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into an excellent technical university. In order to achieve my goal, I will do my best.
I have made up my mind to study Applied Foreign Language after my graduation from vocational high school. I hope that I can pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into an excellent technical university. In order to achieve my goal, I will do my best.

7 Comments:
When it comes to autobiography,I think you shouldn't use the sentence-Fortunately, I was accepted.
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Debie, at 1:41 AM
after my graduation
after graduating
I think you can write more about your senior life
Good!
By
Sally Sun, at 4:52 AM
find no other mistake
By
Estella, at 8:11 AM
沒錯了吧
By
邱秀珍, at 7:31 PM
I can't find other problems.
By
薪雯, at 7:58 PM
不知道要改什麼了
By
Unknown, at 8:21 PM
時態要再多注意
By
Penny, at 8:27 PM
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