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Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Computer -Draft one

Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They are usual to see in everywhere around us. We use them to communicate with many friends all over the world by send e-mails, go to chat rooms, and log in the messenger. We can surf the Internet and search the website to find some useful information for our reports. We can also store data by using Word, Excel, Access, and so on. We are sure that we can’t live without them in our daily life.

Personally, I have a liking for computers. I often use them to have some entertainments like playing computer games, online games, etc. Listen to music and watch films are also good ways to relax myself. It is also convenient to buy a lot of things on the Internet. Therefore, I think computers are really helpful, and couldn’t be replace.

7 Comments:

  • "Listen to music and watch films are also good ways to relax myself."should be "Listening...."
    "and couldn’t be replace."should be"...be replaced"

    By Blogger Debie, at 4:59 AM  

  • relax 可以加myself嗎
    問一下老師

    We are sure that we can’t live without them in our daily life.
    有點怪
    我認為用其他會必較ok
    Good!

    By Blogger Sally Sun, at 5:32 AM  

  • relax用realeive會不會比較好啊??

    all over the world by send e-mails, go to chat rooms, and log in the messenger.

    by 介係詞後面的動詞用ing

    By Blogger Penny, at 11:20 PM  

  • Listening to music and
    watching films are also good ways to relax myself.

    By Blogger Estella, at 4:37 AM  

  • We have the same feeling.

    By Blogger Vivian, at 8:23 AM  

  • This comment has been removed by the author.

    By Blogger Unknown, at 8:45 PM  

  • ...all over the world by send e-mails, go to chat rooms, and log in the messenger....
    by 後面應該是加 ing

    By Blogger Unknown, at 8:48 PM  

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