Computer -Draft one
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They are usual to see in everywhere around us. We use them to communicate with many friends all over the world by send e-mails, go to chat rooms, and log in the messenger. We can surf the Internet and search the website to find some useful information for our reports. We can also store data by using Word, Excel, Access, and so on. We are sure that we can’t live without them in our daily life.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. I often use them to have some entertainments like playing computer games, online games, etc. Listen to music and watch films are also good ways to relax myself. It is also convenient to buy a lot of things on the Internet. Therefore, I think computers are really helpful, and couldn’t be replace.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. I often use them to have some entertainments like playing computer games, online games, etc. Listen to music and watch films are also good ways to relax myself. It is also convenient to buy a lot of things on the Internet. Therefore, I think computers are really helpful, and couldn’t be replace.

7 Comments:
"Listen to music and watch films are also good ways to relax myself."should be "Listening...."
"and couldn’t be replace."should be"...be replaced"
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Debie, at 4:59 AM
relax 可以加myself嗎
問一下老師
We are sure that we can’t live without them in our daily life.
有點怪
我認為用其他會必較ok
Good!
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Sally Sun, at 5:32 AM
relax用realeive會不會比較好啊??
all over the world by send e-mails, go to chat rooms, and log in the messenger.
by 介係詞後面的動詞用ing
By
Penny, at 11:20 PM
Listening to music and
watching films are also good ways to relax myself.
By
Estella, at 4:37 AM
We have the same feeling.
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Vivian, at 8:23 AM
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Unknown, at 8:45 PM
...all over the world by send e-mails, go to chat rooms, and log in the messenger....
by 後面應該是加 ing
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Unknown, at 8:48 PM
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