A Dream - Draft Two

A dream I had was very strange. The unusual dream made me rouse suddenly from sleep at midnight. In the dreamland, I saw myself lie in the bathroom and was covered with fresh blood. Being full of scare, I rushed out of the house to find my family and friends. When I found my mother and father, they ignored me and acted like I didn’t stand in front of them. I was so confused that I called their name loudly. The same reaction happened, they turned their backs on me. Walking on the street alone, no one could hear me or even see me. At this moment, I burst out crying and fell down on the street. Suddenly, dizziness surrounded me, I was taken to a completely different world that I have never been. Finally, I realized that I were a ghost. At this time, I woke up with my clothes damped with sweat. This is the most terrible dream that I will never forget!

A Dream - Draft One

A dream I had was very strange. The unusual dream made me rouse suddenly from sleep at midnight. In the dreamland, I saw myself lie in the bathroom and was covered with fresh blood. Full of scare, I rushed out of the house to find my family and friends. When I found my mom and dad, they ignore me and act like I didn’t stand in front of them. I was confused so that I called their name loudly. The same reaction happened, they turned their backs on me. Walking on the street alone, no one could hear me or even see me. At this moment, I burst out crying and fell down on the street. Suddenly, dizziness surrounded me, I was taken to a completely different world that I have never been. Finally, I realized that I were a ghost. At this time, I woke up with my clothes damp with sweat. This is the most terrible dream that I will never forget!