Autobiography(2)-Draft One

When I was studied in Hou-Chia Junior High School, I have been a vice class leader for two years. I find I am more responsible after being a cadre in the class. Gradually, our teachers have more confidence to me and commend me for achievement. I think it is a good experience in my life of junior high school. After the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools, I applied to the National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School, and chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. Fortunately, I was accepted. In the first year, I was only in the middle of my class. When I was a second grader, I was chose to be an emcee and join a lot of activities. Although this is not a great event, it did build my self-confidence.
I have made up my mind to study Applied Foreign Language after my graduation from vocational high school. I hope that I can pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into an excellent technical university. In order to achieve my goal, I will do my best.

Autobiography(1)-Draft Two

My name is Wei-hsin Chiu. You can also call me Sherry. There are four members in my family. My father who works in a factory is a mechanic. My mother, a career woman, is very capable. I have a younger brother who studies in the elementary school is just nine years old. Both of my parents work really hard because they want us to live in a comfortable life, and have an excellent environment.
I like to play volleyball and badminton. I never attend any ball teams. But I have ever joined an inter-class volleyball game in my class. My class won the championship in the two competitions. I deeply believe that is because we have an experienced coach, constant practice, and strong team spirit. I also have a special talent. Because of my voice, I was chosen to be an emcee in our school. I think it will be a very wonderful experience in my school life.

Autobiography(1) -Draft One

My name is Wei-hsin Chiu. You can also call me Sherry. There are four members in my family. My father who works in a factory is a mechanic. My mother, a career woman, is very capable. I have a younger brother who studies in the elementary school is just nine years old. Both of my parents work really hard, because they want us to live a comfortable life, and have an excellent environment.
I like to play volleyball and badminton. I never attend any ball teams. But I have joined an inter-class volleyball game in my class. My class won the championship in the two competitions. I deeply believe that is because we have an experienced coach, constant practice, and strong team spirit. I also have a special talent. Because of my voice, I was chose to be an emcee in our school. I think it will be a very wonderful experience in my school life.